Friday, 3 August 2018


WALT 1:use conjunctions to join our ideas together
WALT 2: include descriptive detail
This task was quit easy because we watch a video which we left about the fan boys the fan boys help a lot fan f-for a-and  boy b-but o-of y-yet please leave a comment saying how many fan boys you could find in my writing.

i think that i achieve my WALT bye making it interesting and putting exponentiation into my writing.    
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2 comments:

  1. Jazmine6 August 2018 at 09:40

    Kia Ora Pyper.
    I like how you have used fanboys I remeber when I was in mamaku and I used them. I found 3 fanboys words. I like the way you have described the story. Is the story real or fake?
    Bye Jazmine

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  2. Anonymous21 August 2018 at 13:31


    Kia Ora Pyper.
    My name is Cassidy and I go to Ohaeawai Primary School.
    I like how you have used FANBOYS. I found 3 FANBOYS words. We are also learning how to do use FANBOY words to join ideas.Blog you later.

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