Persuasive Writing

Why kids under 2 should not be looking at electronics.

Did you know that if kids under 2 look at electronics it can have
an effect on children's language development, reading skills, and
short term memory?  I think that it is very bad for their eyes
and might affect their eye site.

My first reason is that surveys tell us that 92.2% of 1-year-olds
have already used a mobile device, some starting as young as age
4 months.

Another reason is that kids should be injing life outside and not
inside on a screen.

My third reason is that Dr. Aric Sigman says that they can
unintentionally cause permanent damage to their still-developing
brains. Also too much screen time too soon, he says, “is the very
thing impeding the development of the abilities that parents are so
eager to foster through the tablets. The ability to focus, to
concentrate, to lend attention, to sense other people’s attitudes
and communicate with them.

That is 3 reasons why I think that children  younger than two
should not be looking at electronics. What do you think ?

Persuasive Writing Success Criteria

Introduction

• Opening question
• Opinion/Reason

3 Reasons

• Each paragraph is one idea supported with your reasons/facts

Conclusion

• This ties back/recaps back to the introduction

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