Showing posts with label 2019 writing term 1. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2019 writing term 1. Show all posts

Thursday, 19 March 2020

Diamante poem


This term we have been poems for writing this term here is a Diamante poem that i have done.First we had to come up with two topics that we wanted to do I picked my dog Marly for my first one and my bunny  fluffy for my second one. So here is what i have done.

Friday, 29 March 2019

Writing

26 of march

what we done for this activate is we got to pic a seances that our teacher wired and make it more interesting by adding adjectives when where how why.
WALT ~ Add detail to our sentences  to give detail to the reader.

The phone rang for five minutes.

Adi ~ The phone rang for five annoying minutes.

When ~ Last night the phone rang for five annoying minutes.

Where ~ Last night the phone rang for five annoying minutes well i was in bed.

how ~ last night the phone rang loudly for five annoying minutes well i was in bed.

why ~ last night the phone rang loudly for five annoying minutes because i was busy and i was in bed.