Thursday 7 May 2020

Autumn

Fantail-
Snowy white feathers, blowing in the wind like a flower that's lost its stalk. The fantails' big black beady eyes are threatening. 

Flax Bush-
Dark brown,sharp flax is a giraffe swaying in the cold breezy wind. It looks like a sprinkler watering the garden.

Tress-
The ruff tree  grows from a seed like a baby in a mum tummy. The different coloured leaves fall between our eyes.

Leaves - 
Red and green like the SA flag, The light bird knocking them off their long brunches.

For writing this week we had to write a poem based around Autumn.What we can see out our window is is mine.



2 comments:

  1. Hi Pyper
    Great job with your Autumn writing. I can see lots of different descriptive language like Metaphors. Keep up the good work,
    Molly

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  2. Kia ora Pyper, You have two of my favourite things outside your window- Piwakawaka (fantail) and harakeke (flax). The birds are close to our homes seeking food at the moment. You have observed changes carefully and described the scene in detail. Luckily we have lots of trees remaining green on The West Coast.

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