Kia ora Pyper, I was a bit confused as to what you were writing about until I got to the last slide and saw the picture, then it all made sense:-) Maybe next time you could put the picture at the beginning. I really like your 'sick sentences' you have definitely made them WAY more exciting to read. I especially like number 2 with the rain so heavy it is like ice cubes falling from the sky. Do you know where that picture came from? Ngā mihi Tania
Kia ora Pyper,
ReplyDeleteI was a bit confused as to what you were writing about until I got to the last slide and saw the picture, then it all made sense:-) Maybe next time you could put the picture at the beginning. I really like your 'sick sentences' you have definitely made them WAY more exciting to read. I especially like number 2 with the rain so heavy it is like ice cubes falling from the sky. Do you know where that picture came from?
Ngā mihi
Tania