Friday, 29 March 2019

Writing

26 of march

what we done for this activate is we got to pic a seances that our teacher wired and make it more interesting by adding adjectives when where how why.
WALT ~ Add detail to our sentences  to give detail to the reader.

The phone rang for five minutes.

Adi ~ The phone rang for five annoying minutes.

When ~ Last night the phone rang for five annoying minutes.

Where ~ Last night the phone rang for five annoying minutes well i was in bed.

how ~ last night the phone rang loudly for five annoying minutes well i was in bed.

why ~ last night the phone rang loudly for five annoying minutes because i was busy and i was in bed. 




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