Friday 3 August 2018


WALT 1:use conjunctions to join our ideas together
WALT 2: include descriptive detail
This task was quit easy because we watch a video which we left about the fan boys the fan boys help a lot fan f-for a-and  boy b-but o-of y-yet please leave a comment saying how many fan boys you could find in my writing.

i think that i achieve my WALT bye making it interesting and putting exponentiation into my writing.    

7 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Pyper. I like how you have added a Question in your Description/WALT. The Fanboys That I Have found was 4. Kai pai

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  2. Kia Ora Pyper.
    I like how you have used fanboys I remeber when I was in mamaku and I used them. I found 3 fanboys words. I like the way you have described the story. Is the story real or fake?
    Bye Jazmine

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  3. Kia Ora Pyper,

    This post looks amazing! I really like how you have added colour to make it appealing! You have describe your teddy bear really well, I like how you have told us why it is your treasure.

    Maybe next time you could add a photo of you and your bear or you bear in the clothes you dress your bear in.

    Katelynn,
    Totara 2

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  4. Kia Ora Pyper,

    This Post looks AMAZING!! The background colour makes the post look so appealing and eye catching. I really love the way you have described your special treasure, it sounds like it means a lot to you.

    Maybe next time you could add a photo of your bear.

    Mia,
    Totara 2

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  5. Kia Ora Pyper.
    My name is Cassidy and I go to Ohaeawai Primary School.
    I like how you have used FANBOYS. I found 3 FANBOYS words. We are also learning how to do use FANBOY words to join ideas.Blog you later.

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  6. Kia Ora Pyper.
    I like the way you have described your treasure with shapes.
    Why haven't you named teddy?
    Maybe next time you can proof read your writing before posting it on your blog.
    Bye for now
    From Ella.

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